I think this is very good HanoiVillan, excellent job like all you others have done aswell. If I may offer a couple comments, here they are:
1. Do we want to use the word "landlord"?
2. ...to finishing 17th... => merely to stay in the Premier League
3. A bullet point list is great, and four items are not too many. However, I'm not sure if we should start with the investigation, is that the main issue? I would swap that as last bullet point. Opening up a dialogue could be the first one, it's very realistic for them to do. Also, third bullet point has "and share" twice, the first one could be deleted.