The standard of Front Page articles has really dropped recently on this site and unfortunately this is another.
You have painted a fantastic picture at Villa Park, and quite frankly at the moment we are not quite there. MON has done a really good job but not as good as you make out.
Your viewpoint is very one dimensional and slanted, even though you have analysed the players it's not impartial in the slightest. I like to see myself as a realistic Villa fan that sees things how they, you do make some good points but just completely neglect that anything is wrong which derives the article of quality.
I have picked out a few crackers:
'Martin O'Neill has been rebuilding David O'Leary's squad from scratch'
- From scratch implies everything new. The previous article written by Trent underlines our losses in Bouma and Laursen who were already at the club when MON got here. Barry, arguably our best player was also here, as was the emergence of Agbonlahor. You can tell me MON got the best out of them and you are right but your sentence doesn't state that, you later on point that out but still go back to Bouma and Laursen being key. DOL was crap, but credit where credit is due.
'Curtis Davies £10m, for a young defender with a very bright future'
He might have a bright future, he has shown glimpses of it. But £10 million seems £5 million too much at this present time. You even highlight yourself that he needed Laursen.
'Nigel Reo-Coker £8.5 million'-
You try your hardest to justify this, but you even start by saying he hasn't played ! He is not worth £8.5 million, if we sold him now it would be closer to £5million
'Other purchases, such as Sidwell and Salifou in particular, have been criticised as being pointless considering they don't play, but for me this argument has no credence to it.'
We don't have the luxury to spend £5 million on a player such as Sidwell for 'backup'. I think most people here agree that he was brought to replace Barry last year.
Have I completely missed it - or have you not mentioned £7.8 million Carlos Cuellar?
I just want the article to have a more down the line point of view, your article has good points but it would have come across a lot better IMO if you included some of the points that I made.
This piece in the message board is fine, but as front page article for this website? Not quite.